• Cover letters that get you the interview
  • by Amit Bansal
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  • TO begin with, let me define a cover letter. It is a letter that accompanies your résumé and introduces you, highlighting your reasons for sending the résumé to the particular employer. A covering letter must accompany ALL non-electronic résumé postings. For e-mail, you should substitute the cover letter with a short introduction in the body of the e-mail. So, why send a cover letter in the first place?

    The role of the Cover Letter is to get the Hiring Manager to say: “Hmmm... you know what, I want to meet this person for this job opening.” So what should you write in the Cover Letter that will get you the nod from the Hiring Manager. To start with, remember that a good Cover Letter is not a Cover Letter at all, it’s a SALES Letter! Let’s go through the process of building the Sales Letter now.

    How to address the recipient

    Address a specific recipient. It’s not always easy to find the name of the specific Hiring Manager, but try to do so, if at all possible. Usually, you can just call the company and ask who the hiring manager is for a given position.

    Inappropriate address:

    “Dear Sir or Madam”

    “To Whom It May Concern.”

    This lazy approach will show that you were not concerned enough to find out whom to address your letter.

    Appropriate address: “Dear

    In the worst-case scenario, your letter could begin with “Dear Hiring Manager for ”.

    Paragraph 1

    Opening - Tell why you are a Good Fit for that Job.
    The cover letter must target a specific position. If you’re answering an ad, it’s easy to target your letter to a specific job. But if you’re making cold calls to employers, you’ll have to do some research to find out what positions are open. Try old ads for job postings at job portals and company website. Don’t list several possible positions or say that you’re willing to consider any position.

    Weak opening:
    ‘I am writing today to apply for the account manager position you have posted on your company Website.’

    Better opening:
    ‘I have increased the size and sales levels of my client base in every position I have held, which in turn has increased the revenues and profits of my employers. I want to bring this same success to the account position you have posted on your Website.’

    Paragraph 2 -Synopsis

    Make a mention of academic and professional experience relevant to the job. Provide details about your professional and academic qualifications. Provide more information about how you can provide the benefits you mentioned in the first paragraph. Be sure to stress accomplishments and achievements rather than job duties and responsibilities. Expand on specific items from your résumé that are relevant to the job you are seeking. Use solid action verbs to describe your accomplishments and achievements.

    Weak synopsis: ‘I have an MBA from XYZ Business School with an aggregate of 76%. I have completed my BE in the year 2007 with 82% marks. I have worked as a Summer Trainee in ZBC Company for 2 months.’
     
    YOU are wasting stationary by just restating the résumé that does not tell anything additional.

    Quick take
    • Address a specific person
    • Target a specific job position
    • Give a snapshot of education/professional experience
    • Stress on your accomplishments, not responsibilities
    • End with a strong call to action

    Strong synopsis:
    ‘I have a formal training in business management with a keen interest in the area of Event Management. The exceptional organizational abilities and detail orientation I deployed to conduct college festivals at my college, are directly applicable to the skills needed for event management. With exposure to interacting with corporate for fund-raising, I can prospect new business opportunities, successfully manage client relationships, give presentations, and much more.’


    Paragraph 3 - Relate


    Tie yourself to the Job/Company. If you are answering an ad or online job posting, the specifics of your cover letter should be tied as closely as possible to the actual wording of the ad. Echo the ad’s words and intent.


    Weak relation
    :
    ‘I will like to apply for the job of Software Programmer in ABC Company.


    Strong relation
    :
    ‘I have a strong background in programming. I came across this opportunity with ABC Company and found it very exciting. It matches my interest and skills in the area of mobile computing and I can contribute to the success of the organization while pursuing my professional goals.’

    Final Paragraph - A call to Action

    Set the stage for the Interview Call. You want to get an interview call – do not be vague about it. Come right out, ask for an interview and then follow up. If you take this proactive approach, you are much more likely to get called for interviews than if you did not follow up.

    Weak call to action:
    ‘I hope you will consider my résumé favorably and consider me for the position. I look forward to hearing from you.’

    Strong call to action:
    ‘I look forward to being interviewed at your earliest convenience. Thank you so much for this opportunity. If you require any additional information, I can be contacted at the phone numbers listed above.’

    Remember that a cover letter is the most important part in your sales package. The product is you. Like any other sales letter, you are trying to motivate a specific action. You want the employer to invite you for an interview. A well thought-out dynamic cover letter can attract the employer’s attention and get your phone ringing! 

    Amit Bansal is a Career Counsellor, Trainer and CEO of PurpleLeap.

    Amit will answer your queries through the month of August. Just post them at the bottom of this article!

  • Published on: August 02, 2010
  • 34 Comments
  • srikanth | Jul 18, 2011

  • hello mr amit, im bank employee,recently i have completed my MBA, How to write intimation letter to my md
  • hema | Dec 24, 2010

  • hello sir, thanx for ur suggstn regarding how to improve english. Sir if possible can u send me a sample resume for applying in R&D in any companysenior by a post graduate in biotechnology . with regard hema
  • Packiaraja | Dec 02, 2010

  • Sir,I am a lecturer (Chemical &ceramic)in an engg college.For last 3 yrs I was working with dissatisfaction.Now I feel improving day by day .what is the highest achievements in this field.
  • RAJESH | Nov 15, 2010

  • my english is poor. how to improve the vocablary. any books you can suggest.
  • Aanand | Nov 08, 2010

  • I m b.tech 3rd year student branch as cse i want sample resum
  • ravi | Oct 31, 2010

  • it's very nice , it cover all 360 degree of matter , news etc
  • nickey | Oct 26, 2010

  • sir i'm a btec final year student branch e.c plz snd me some resume and coverletter samples
  • SRINIVAS. A | Oct 20, 2010

  • I am an engineer {B.E- Mech(1984), M.E- Management(1991)} having worked in various positions since 1985. At present I am at a senior level in an R&D organization. My skills include Autocad 2010, Catia V5R19, Hyperworks, LabVIEW 2009, and MS Office. I am not enjoying the ride and wish to get off the bus. Where would I fit in? I am looking at overseas offers. Could you kindly guide me in this matter? Regards Srinivas. A
  • beuty | Oct 11, 2010

  • dear sir i am in final year btech-cse. please send me some resume samples .
  • anant r | Sep 16, 2010

  • i have completed my bachelor of engg this year. I had taken a resume service on one of the online job protals. When i got the revised resume i found out that they have mentioned only my final year marks . i have scored first class in my final year but my previous year marks are not first class. I am worried that an employer might put an allegation that i have not put my real marks just to attract the employers. Is it fine to just mention the final year marks??I know the company criteria is first class in all semesters? How should i deal with this problem
  • Ravi | Aug 31, 2010

  • my english is vary week , becouse my famaliy member and naber, relatv is medal class catagary . i am B.com graguat but my enlish is vary poor . plz solotion this quriy.....
  • shivam | Aug 26, 2010

  • hello Sir presently i m pursuing BE final year with IT branch, but i have a keen interest in mass communication . I have also a good leading ability so please suggest me whether after finishing my BE its a good choice for me or not and if gud how can i go in this field.right now i am just 20 years older so i think age is not any factor for me.
  • Rajesh | Aug 25, 2010

  • how to develop the english?
  • rames | Aug 24, 2010

  • please send resume final year BE,cse.
  • Ram | Aug 21, 2010

  • Dear Sir, I'm a student how to improve my english plz suggest me. any courses & book's
  • logo | Aug 19, 2010

  • Ashutosh, English language takes time to develop. However, preparing for tests is relatively easier. It is best to enroll for a program that helps you prepare on various facets of written test of English. In parallel, you should start reading a daily English newspaper. To start with, read the sections of the newspaper that you find more interesting, say sports, movies etc. The objective is to get to the habit of reading English- it will give you dramatic results if you spend 30 mins every day.
  • logo | Aug 19, 2010

  • For a part-time job, I will suggest that you get yourself certified on MS Office. You can go to Certiport site to find out the procedure for certification. This will help you get some part-time data management kind of roles.
  • logo | Aug 19, 2010

  • Methu, you need to prepare well if you really want to get into ISRO. Its good to see your focus as you are working towards your goals well in advance. The process for ISRO is a written test followed by interview. In the past, they have been working with 65% eligibility for the written test. However, not every applicant gets a written test call. Its good to have higher percentage of marks in your engg to avoid disappointment at initial stage itself. The written test is on the pattern on GATE exam with lot of focus on technical concepts. You can look at some sample questions by googling. After the test, there is a short-list of students for the interview. ISRO took about 100 electronics freshers last year so if you prepare well, you can get through.
  • logo | Aug 19, 2010

  • Arathi, I am glad to see that you are taking control of your career and are able to take actions to move ahead. There are 2 options to upgrade your profile. You can invest in some short duration certifications or you can look at a 1 year long part-time management program. There are lot of programs for working professionals available from premier B-Schools like IIMC, IIMB, XLRI etc. You can look at these organizations website to get a first level of information on the options. Based on your interest, you can explore deeper into any of these programs.
  • Methu | Aug 17, 2010

  • I am a engg student in 2nd year. My branch is ECE. I want to go in ISRO as a seientest. How can i go?
  • Ummer Mohd | Aug 16, 2010

  • sir, I have finished my B. Com from Kahsmir University and now i am looking to go abroad for pursuing MBA. To ease my financial burden i will be doing a part time job there. In this regard ur goodself is requested to suggest a best computer course, which will help me in getting a part time job in England.
  • ASHUTOSH RAJ | Aug 16, 2010

  • sir,i am in B.C.A 2nd year.i want prepration in banking.my english is very poor.plese help me.
  • Pankaj raj | Aug 16, 2010

  • Sir, I'm 12th passed student i want to join in a good job suggest me plz.
  • Pankaj raj | Aug 16, 2010

  • Sir, I'm 12th passed student i want to join in a good job suggest me plz.
  • Bala | Aug 13, 2010

  • @Aarthi, I think you have spent good amount of time for your education. I think, In India , education is just filter out the candidates, when it comes to job. Since you have 7 years of experience in Finance, you can opt better opportunities in your field. Taking up new course, definitely will give you good edge over others, but leaving the job for education is depends on your financial status. It may hurt you, if you cannot perform again in the course, you have taken to pursue. I would suggest you to list out all the weakness points you have. Resolve each issue. At the end of the issue, you will be better than what you are now. Thanks Bala
  • logo | Aug 13, 2010

  • Shaila, you have asked a question that possibly requires me to write another article :-) however, here are some quick tips on how to go about your job search. First step, create the list of target companies and find their contact details. Find out if there are any open positions. If yes, it is easy to make a call. Ask to connect to the hr/recruitmnet dept and say that you are calling in context of xyz opening. The rest is the same as your covering letter. If there are no current openings, call and talk about what you can do for the company and then close with something like "I will like to explore opportunities where I can contribute".
  • logo | Aug 13, 2010

  • Dear Chinmaya, There are KPOs which are into real finance related jobs like equity research, corporate finance/Merger & acquisition support , credit research etc. Some of the good KPOS in Bangalore are JP Morgan, YL eservices, Global outsourcing, Thompson reuter etc. In this KPOs you join as Research Associate & then you can become Financial Analyst & senior Financial analyst & build your career in finance.
  • logo | Aug 13, 2010

  • Dear R.SUBRAMANIAN, Your experience in international trading & business development has been as a travelling sales person? Also I will like to know if you were working with a trading company or a manufacturing company? If you have good exposure in EXIM (Export & Import) documentation you can get into export houses,International logistic companies , shipping companies/corporations to get deeper & real insights in foreign trade & they prefer people with 5-6 years of experience.Their work involves liasoning between exporters and port authority. If your knack is pure sales & marketing you can also join some export houses at the entry level as they look for marketing guys for boosting overseas sales, searching new business hubs and potential markets abroad & Customer Relationship Management (CRM). Better to learn some foreign languages too.
  • logo | Aug 12, 2010

  • Dear Krishna, If it is any consolation, your problem is not unique! We all tend to have problems with English because it is not native to us. And what most of us need, is not necessarily great fundamental knowledge of English but application skills. And application skills (how to use English to serve practical purposes) in your case means the skill to speak and may be write well. I would not recommend ‘English Speaking Classes’ or self-help books for this purpose. A regular diet of reading, writing and speaking English is the best solution for you. Read newspapers regularly, do some precise writing exercises with editorials in newspapers and try and speak in English as much as possible. If you don’t have too many people to speak with, try reading aloud. When you come across new words do not rush to the dictionary but try and understand the meaning in context. At the end of the day, check the meaning for all new words that you came across during the day and confirm if you got the meaning right each time. Whether you got it right or wrong originally, you will this way remember the right meaning, for a long time! Once you learn a new word please remember to use it while writing and speaking and that way you will learn ‘applications skills too! I must tell you that you will not see dramatic changes in the short term but whatever changes you see will be lasting. Finally, it is not the lack of English speaking skills but the lack of confidence that arises from being conscious about it that affect us. Please understand that you will have a few interviews to attend before you reach perfection with your English and in those interviews let your other skills come to the fore and not be affected by your diffidence about English.
  • arathi | Aug 12, 2010

  • Hello Sir, I am an M.Com, MBA finance with 7 years work experience. I have not done my MBA from any elite business school due to financial constraint.But off late,I have started feeling left out on the opportunities that a B-school pass out gets, despite of the fact that I have been equally competitive at work. Is there any course/degree that I should pursue,to shape my career better.Thanks.
  • R.SUBRAMANIAN | Aug 09, 2010

  • Hello Mr.Amit, I have completed my MBA (International Business) and having experience about eight years in International trading, Business Development. Please let me know how to get more experience in working with foreign countries in international trading. I understand that there are organizations / institutes who can take candidates as trainees on projects basis to give exposure in abroad. Thank you.
  • Chinmaya Pattnaik | Aug 07, 2010

  • Hello Sir I have completed my MBA with Marketing and Finance as specilisation. Now I am in search of a good job in Finance at Banglore. Is it good for my career if I join any KPO. Is there any good Finance courses which I can join? Which are the good companies in KPO at Banglore?
  • krishna | Aug 06, 2010

  • my english is poor. how to improve the vocablary. any books you can suggest. am stumbling at interviews.
  • shaila | Aug 06, 2010

  • this is vary helpful. please also suggest me tipson making the cold calls fo r interview. is some etiquette availible?
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